This chapter though

about being 12 when he lost his virginity in a childrens home

Why would you write about that? Why would you feel the need to put that in a book

Then the passage itself "she pulled her tits out", did she? she actually pulled them out? And "she raised up her negligee", what is this carry on childrens home?

How insecure do you need to be to brag about losing your cherry at 12 years old?

hahahahahah

Posted By: Smickers, Nov 11, 17:10:22