you should probably have used a relative pronoun for your second clause

"who then vanish....."

Posted By: shoddy, Mar 23, 20:28:23

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Ye Olde Grammar Bill
Posted By: MonkeyPuzzle, Mar 23, 20:46:24
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Very well spotted. You passed my test. 10/10 and a house point for you 👏🌟
Posted By: Grammar Police, Mar 23, 20:33:53

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