I would cut the "and family" out straightaway, keep it simple stupid.

Nobody gives a s**t about all the other tank engines only Thomas.

Posted By: Tombs, Oct 9, 20:32:07

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Good point, so we focus purely on the adventures of Florrie the lorry
Posted By: Jumbo1, Oct 9, 20:35:16

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