Not bad - needs a better last line, though.
Posted By: Yellalee, Jul 30, 16:48:20
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- No, it is,
Posted By: DNB41, Jul 30, 17:11:48 - but when they shoot, you dive for cover??
Posted By: grimsbycanary3, Jul 30, 16:54:31
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