this is a bit clunky mate...

"We’re now delighted to offer you the opportunity to purchase the same superb quality comfy sofas right, here in France, with the advantage of avoiding jumping through the nightmare rather costly post Brexit import hurdles, making your search for the perfect sofa in France an simple one."

the *comfy sofas right, here in France, with the* bit

the "an" instead of "a" in *sofa in France an simple one*

also,

"We love making people happy and seeing the smiles on the face of our clients, when they finally find their perfect sofa, really makes all the hard work worthwhile". maybe after "really" ding in an "it".

Posted By: Tombs on October 16th 2024 at 21:27:18

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Who wants to critique our new website? (General Chat) - tudders, Oct 16, 20:36:55
- I don't live in France so a total waste of time (General Chat) - Charles21, Oct 16, 23:07:29
- Lots of white spacing on page you link to (n/m) (General Chat) - WOTB No1 Tipster, Oct 16, 22:55:35
- It's shit x (n/m) (General Chat) - Chris Peacock, Oct 16, 22:47:23
- Shouldn’t it be in French? (n/m) (General Chat) - Fenwood Lad, Oct 16, 22:47:07
- Site's broken (General Chat) - Cardiff Canary, Oct 16, 21:29:09
  - In store cafe, or a street food van in the car park (General Chat) - Jumbo1, Oct 16, 21:31:30
- this is a bit clunky mate... (General Chat) - Tombs, Oct 16, 21:27:18
  - before, duh (General Chat) - Tombs, Oct 16, 21:29:32
- chairs lovely stuff... (n/m) (General Chat) - Lager top, Oct 16, 21:26:35
- 'with' missing from Stay in Touch statement (General Chat) - JD3, Oct 16, 21:08:42
  - Jumbo gave him a creampie (n/m) (General Chat) - Lentil Weaver, Oct 16, 21:09:57
- If you have a pillow fight with the Death, you have to prepare (General Chat) - Lentil Weaver, Oct 16, 21:00:46
- It’s all in English- how will the French understand it?! (n/m) (General Chat) - Jumbo1, Oct 16, 21:00:01
  - We have a plugin for that. As I'm sure you have something similar.. (n/m) (General Chat) - tudders, Oct 16, 21:06:38
    - My Garry does (n/m) (General Chat) - Jumbo1, Oct 16, 21:18:08
- is their a norfolk option for the accent chairs? i couldn't find a dropdown menu (n/m) (General Chat) - Tombs, Oct 16, 20:54:37
- Would be useful to have a how many seats filter (n/m) (General Chat) - Old Git, Oct 16, 20:54:35
- The pink “shop now” button covers up the cat’s bumhole on the first page (n/m) (General Chat) - Old Git, Oct 16, 20:49:28
  - That's down to your browsing history. (n/m) (General Chat) - tudders, Oct 16, 20:50:48
    - If it was down to my browsing history the cat’s bumhole would be centre stage (n/m) (General Chat) - Old Git, Oct 16, 20:52:34
      - With your butler's cock not far behind. (n/m) (General Chat) - tudders, Oct 16, 21:05:29
        
        Oh I say (n/m) (General Chat) - Old Git, Oct 16, 21:05:53
        
        I'm the great Uncle Bumhole. (General Chat) - tudders, Oct 16, 21:08:57
- The leather sofa filter brings back all sofas.... (n/m) (General Chat) - Astroturf, Oct 16, 20:48:23
  - It brings back all that are available in leather, we just don't have all the images yet. (n/m) (General Chat) - tudders, Oct 16, 20:55:08
- Theres a lot of pictures of cats with bowties and two tails. (n/m) (General Chat) - BigGrantHolt, Oct 16, 20:43:43
  - I know, some of them are dead. (n/m) (General Chat) - tudders, Oct 16, 20:45:42
- My cabinet maker got arrested recently (General Chat) - Lentil Weaver, Oct 16, 20:42:24
  - It's all about the brief. (n/m) (General Chat) - tudders, Oct 16, 20:44:16

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