this is a bit clunky mate...

"We’re now delighted to offer you the opportunity to purchase the same superb quality comfy sofas right, here in France, with the advantage of avoiding jumping through the nightmare rather costly post Brexit import hurdles, making your search for the perfect sofa in France an simple one."

the *comfy sofas right, here in France, with the* bit

the "an" instead of "a" in *sofa in France an simple one*

also,

"We love making people happy and seeing the smiles on the face of our clients, when they finally find their perfect sofa, really makes all the hard work worthwhile". maybe after "really" ding in an "it".

Posted By: Tombs on October 16th 2024 at 21:27:18


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